Technology designed to make people's lives simpler often turn out to make them more complicated
With the development of technology, more and more tools contribute to facilitating our daily life in many fields, including transportation, socialization, sports, games and so on. These tools designed to make our life simpler but, in someone's view, turn out to make life more complicated. However, in my opinion, most of these seemingly complicities only have more functions than before, while they do make our life simpler.
As for transportation, people enjoy more conveniences than before. For example, in the past, only ship can be used for vehicle across the ocean, while at present jet planes and helicopters are alternative. Although it often requires some additional complex procedures like dividing baggage into categories and passing more complex security tests, these complicities play little part compare to the higher transportation efficiency. Moreover, the helicopter also make mountain trip easier and more popular than before, since it provides aids for trapped people and alternative view in air. Even though well-trained faculties are required to operate that machine, it seems less vital compare to the advantages that the helicopter gives us. Thanks to the conveniences giving by various vehicles, the transportation at present is simpler.
When it comes to the games, people experience operations closer to the reality. In the past, people often need to click the key board or move mouse to operate the role in games, while nowadays, only to move the game handle can operate games. Someone may argue that more complex procedures are required including driver install and adding large screen. However, in the past, no one can believe that he can play a basketball match in almost real condition at home. And if this image comes true, no one will care spending a little time to install a driver.
As for other fields like socialization and sports, we spend more times on treating our messages, E-mails and sport devices while it seems pale compare to the conveniences they bring to us. Thus, these tools make our life simpler.
Basically, with the development of technology, more inventions make our lives simpler.
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| 2019-01-14 | Steven Huang | 66 | view |
| 2017-05-17 | Angelina2016 | 76 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as for, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26023391813 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86272243038 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56432748538 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7231409808 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.823529412 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265152595739 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088105068699 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935123905417 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160418653929 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856330413204 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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