Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, there is a widespread belief that sharing information among the people who work in the domain of the business, academic and science is essential, since the idea of distributing wide range of information is likely assist them to prevent some issues, which in turn, may contribute individuals' standard of living. However, it needs to take into account, not all information ought to be shared because it is highly likely that it may implicate some downsides that will lead to some unavoidable problems. The arguments in support of sharing information are multifaceted, yet there are also factors that it is worth to keep them under secret. In this essay, I will touch upon each of them.
There are multifarious reasons, why individuals prefer particular information ought to be opened to the public, First and foremost, by sharing out some important information to people working in the field of business, they will be able to tackle problems such as, price and quality. For instance, they are able to improve and create wide range of commodities by using various techniques, which in turn help them to reduce their expanses on these products. Therefore, people will be able to purchase not only quality goods but also for reasonable price.
Likewise, it is worth to mention, sharing information might have great impact on improving the lives of people providing that solely right kind of information is used. People who suffered from serious diseases might be a good example to support my idea. By distributing this information to a vast amount of sources, will be beneficial, as by preventing these diseases by virtue of a large public, they will be able to stop wide spreading these diseases into other countries. However, it does not mean that all information should be given to public freely.
It is worth to take into consideration that vast amount of information ought to be restricted from spreading. This information is extremely essential and valuable to be shared because the improper use of these dates will cause inevitable issues around the world. It can be exemplified by following situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08620689655 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8468296682 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520114942529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8228906865 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.428571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293992269818 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104440222942 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599012231837 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190329387649 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195623622642 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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