Should money be spent on space exploration? To what extend do you agree?
Nowadays, several developed countries have a race to spend a lot of money to discover unknown space. They do it due to science development. Although, the science expedition has valuable advantages to human race history, this high cost project attracted myriad negative questions from inhabitants who believe those billion dollar projects merely a particulars unnecessary effort.
To governments, scientists, and supporters who are adherent of space exploration think space research activity is needed regarding its benefits. When a space equipment, satellite or automatic rocket, send to outer sky,...
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Sentence: When a space equipment, satellite or automatic rocket, send to outer sky, those would discover numerous data which could uses as interpretation of unidentified objects.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to could and uses
Sentence: It is much beneficial, if the money spend to other sectors which could potentially provide direct impact to inhabitants.
Description: The fragment money spend to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace spend with verb, past participle
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 302 350
No. of Characters: 1639 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.169 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.427 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.787 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.201 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.332 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5