This essay presents an opportunity to discuss the functioning of a team working on an assignment. This essay contains various points agreed and disagreed upon. I will further elaborate on the points presented in the lecture and the passage.
The speaker of the lecture points out that when people are grouped in a team , working becomes highly inefficient and
unsatisfactory . The speaker furnishes several points to support his theory which are as follows : Firstly , the speaker states that there are certain instances in which group members do not really contribute anything to complete the task . However, the recognition that is received is given to the group as a whole (remove) . The real contributors don’t really receive any individual recognition. Secondly , the speaker describes the inefficiency of the working members by stating that various projects progress slowly due to controversies among the team members . Lastly, the speaker states that often influential people effect the functioning of the group destructively. Moreover, highly influential people can be misleading (try writing what is mentioned in the lecture ).
The author of the reading passage has contrasting views in comparison to the views of the speaker in the lecture. The author proposes several points which, contradict the speaker’s views which are as follows(change): Firstly , the author states that a group of people has comprehensive range of knowledge , mastery and skills than an individual. Moreover, a team serves to be highly resourceful in terms of professional work . However , the speaker argues that people working as a team are unproductive. Secondly , the author states that when people work as a group , work is done quickly. However, the speaker states that often the objective is not completed due to poor work culture and personal habits of the members. Thirdly , the author applauds team work by stating that groups come up with innovative solutions to problems. Lastly , the author states that in a team , no single person is accountable and can be held responsible for any incorrect decision - the entire team is responsible. Moreover, the author further states that working as a group can be rewarding as the team members have better chances to sparkle. However , the speaker contradicts the author by stating that the contributors do not receive any special appreciation. The group is appreciated as one.
The essay above clearly demonstrates the agreements and disagreements on the functioning of a team working on an assignment . The author of the reading passage believes that working as a group is perhaps the best way to accomplish the desired objective. which is opposed by the speaker of the passage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, lastly, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 1373.03311258 166% => OK
No of words: 428.0 270.72406181 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34112149533 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03344681744 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43691588785 0.540411800872 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 419.366225166 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 21.0 8.23620309051 255% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5998767214 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06452816374 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 4.19205298013 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337475555221 0.272083759551 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107794356394 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816891736988 0.0662205650399 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186375240471 0.162205337803 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791786326506 0.0443174109184 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 63.6247240618 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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