In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that people living in present are more self-centered than the people living in the past. They are more career-oriented than family-oriented. These kind of people prefer living alone rather in the family. I believe it has a positive development for them.
For instance, people choose to live alone are more self-assertive. They prefer presenting their ideas ahead of others. They truly believe in hard working. Also, these kind of people refrain from unnecessary formalities of family ties and rather concentrate on their goals. They believe that the time they spend on family issues they rather utilize it for enhancing their career and for the betterment of their future.
Living alone can definitely bring some positive development not just on the career but it also helps you in self-control in oneself for e.g. living expenses, personal development, assessing own strengths and weaknesses and other important factors. These people give priorities to those which they believe are important to move forward in their lives.
It is widely believed that the global competition has made people to think and work faster than in the past. It is not at all bad to spend more time with the family but to stay in a competition you need to work out on your own priorities. It is commonly said that if you slow down your pace some other will lead you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eed to work out on your own priorities. It is commonly said that if you slow down ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., if, so, for instance, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96943231441 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.753869811 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524017467249 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8673735273 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2857142857 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253518981982 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959190371271 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816254524529 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171019063661 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076451952379 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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