There are certain consideration and factors that everyone can take into account to investigate and examine people’s opinion. I certainly believe that making new friends easily is more important than the ability of maintain friendship in short groups. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. To substantiate my case, the following paragraphs represent conspicuous reasons to elaborate my preference.
The first and the foremost reason why I support this idea is changing your country of stay. People always search for convenient life. When they notice that they should change their country to have a better life they move to foreign countries. Besides, they face many problems there and friends can only people can help them to solve their difficulties. Therefore, if they make new friends easily they can find life enjoyable. For instance, I migrated to California to study in high ranked university and I made lots of friends there. But I could not make friend easily. So, I felt depressed at first month of my stay.
Moreover, people spend lots of their time in work place. So, it is necessary for them to have friends there. Because they can go together to lunch and talk about their same difficulties at work. It Not only raise their confidence but also they feel awesome. For example, when a new person comes at work place he will not know about supervisor’s negative behavior. So, if he find friends easily they will tell them everything about boss and others. In fact, it prevents bad situation happen suddenly
Last but not least, some people think that maintaining friends can give you positive energy and keep you strong. In contrast, I think that people should not use to one person. Because the relationships do not stay calm and strong all the time. Sometimes it would hurt their feelings. For instance, if a person does wrong activity it will disturbes their friends. Consequently, they will leave him alone.
Due to aforementioned reasons, I think that all folk should bear in mind that making friend easily have more advantages than the other one. Stay in different location, have a good time at work place are prime supports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that everyone can take into account to investigate and examine people's op...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ople always search for convenient life. When they notice that they should change the...
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Line 6, column 380, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...sor's negative behavior. So, if he find friends easily they will tell them ever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, in fact, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01923076923 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68723872448 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568681318681 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.934260323 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2692307692 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167439259122 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474816296245 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059059089365 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986071656866 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349445952594 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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