Some people believe that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
Using animal is one of the serious problems in many countries. While many people believe that animal experiments are necessary for testing the safety of human medicines. Personally, I believe that animals are used for the health field by the human is not ethical.
On the one hand, there are powerful reasons why a large number of animal experiments are implemented by scientists. Firstly, animals can act as models for the study of the human organism. New medicines require testing because researchers must measure both beneficial and adverse effects of a compound on a whole organism. As a result, animals are suited for testing the feature of new medicine before clinical trials in humans can take place. Secondly, it is important to develop and test potential forms of treatment, animals are used to evolve these potential therapies as part of the applied research process. For example, medicine for Parkinson's disease has been developed using animal models with induced Parkinson's like symptoms.
On the other hand, I also agree with those who argue that people have no right to exploit the beneficial resources from the pure animal. First reason is that many animals are used for experiments and then killed. This could lead to the imbalance in the natural environment and cause serious global issues like global warming or be changing the animal population. In addition, it is remarkable that there are too many animals which are served for the study purposes can impact on the global problems as climate change. Another reason is that it is expensive to use model organisms as the animals must be purchased and then fed, housed and cared for.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the use of animals for medical testing should be avoided at all costs, animals deserve human's respect. Alternatives to medical testing on animals must be sought.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ne hand, there are powerful reasons why a large number of animal experiments are implemented by s...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed and then fed, housed and cared for. In conclusion, it seems to me that the u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05863192182 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58909507334 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534201954397 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8764258246 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236587669783 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937515124215 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548727196489 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171781559989 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553294883613 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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