Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that environment seems to be one of the most controversial issues in many countries. While some people consider that this problem is out of control to be tackled by individuals, I would argue that effort of human can alleviate environmental problems.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why many environmental problems are hardly possible for each person to address it. First reason is that a large number of environmental issues such as climate change, air pollution, land degradation or global warming require the intervention of all members of society and combine with all governments in the world. There is no simple way to address them without strong commitments from the government. Therefore, local and national authorities have been gathering together in a wide range of international conventions, seeking an effective solution to combat the spread of environmental issues, making global efforts in terms of environmental protection. Furthermore, the growth volume of traffic on road is mainly producing emissions which bring some adverse consequences on the atmosphere. As a result, it is only government could cut down on emissions from private vehicles by adopting strict policies to introduce restrictions on transports.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that citizens can take some measures to save our planet. Firstly, governments should offer a range of environmental awareness campaigns to educate people how good keeping the environment clean. It is also the effective way in long-term. For example, Singapore has been known for the cleanest city in the world because most citizens are equipped with knowledge about protecting the environment when they were children. Secondly, turning lights off before leaving a room can save a great deal of energy produced by burning fossil fuel like oil and coal. For instance, Earth hour is such a great global event that million of people around the world join in annually with the hope that their action of turning lights off for one hour can make a positive contribution on the planet.
In conclusion, although individuals are not able to resolve all environmental problems, it seems to me that individuals take small steps to reduce the rapid increasing of environmental issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...son to address it. First reason is that a large number of environmental issues such as climate ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29362880886 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02964281454 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606648199446 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9873280261 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.4 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193765879614 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057742160046 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543629083231 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119807063312 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311940649009 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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