In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
In many countries, people can expect to live longer nowadays than they did in the past. However, this proliferation is causing many problems that directly affect the society as well as individuals. People should take action to address these issues as soon as possible.
The growth of aging populations is accompanied with a lot of related problems. First of all, people of retirement age receive pensions as their welfare, which will lead to a greater tax burden for working adults since the number of young people who are able to work become smaller. Additionally, there will be a rise in the demand for healthcare. Young adults will have to look after their elderly relatives, which will be pressure on them.
There are some actions that could be taken to mitigate these problems. Firstly, the governments should increase the retirement age of citizens, which will help with the shortage of labors as well as give people more time to devote to their country and enjoy a productive working life. Moreover, national budgets should be spent on medical advances and health programs to help the elderly stay healthy and able to work longer. The government should also encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who can pay taxes and contribute to the country’s development. One more measure would be investing on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities due to the growth of older citizens.
In conclusion, increasing average life expectancy brings some negative effects but there are a variety of solutions to alleviate these problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20233463035 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78572048324 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3554394118 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.846153846 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207596616884 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752487964438 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580163183506 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123024903778 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246151347865 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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