It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
The issue statement says that the nation's traditions are preserved and generated mainly in cities. However, i disagree to this statement due to the following reasons. Firstly, most of the traditions originated from villages and can be best preserved in villages only. Secondly, cities have negative effect on the traditions and lastly even some cities are preserving traditons too . These reasons alongwith examples are dilineated below.
Firstly, as we all know to study any nation's rich cultural heritage you must study it's villages where the traditions are still very much preserved instead of studying it's major cities where the traditions are hackeneyed. Additionally, traditions have a bucolic origin. In ancient times, when there were no cities, villages were the only source of tradition and as development occured, cities came into existence and as the time passed there came the distinctions between the cities and villages. So, these traditions originated from villages but not from cities. Furthermore, these traditions are degrading day-by-day in cities. For instance, in earlier times parents can scorn their children, they can chide or can do anything but now-a-days they call police even when thay chided them gently, but this parent-children relationship is very much preserved in villages till now. So, traditions are generated in villages only.
Secondly, cities have a negative effect on the traditions, as with the development boon comes alongwith bane. Consider the case of historical forts and buildings which are the source of any nation's rich cultural heritage and many traditions can be preserved there but with the development many forts and buildings have been obliterted just on the name of developement. It is more in case of cities, but you can still find many forts in villages so we can deduce that cities have negative effect on the traditions and values.
Last but not the least, as every coin has two faces, even big cities can preserve and generate values too like cities in countries like Rome, Egypt etc where the traditions are still preserved. Even you can see there are many restaurants which still ersatz thhe idea of old traditions and still serve the food in that old heritage adorned dress. So, it is upto the populace of nation whether they will ruin their rich traditions or preserve them. Even traditions are depleting from villages too. Consider the case of marriages in India, earlier people used to gather for around 10 days even before marriage but now-a-days they came in marriage palace just on the day of marriage and then leave. So, communications are decreasing.
So, at the end i would like to say that the traditions are generated not in cities but they can be preserved best in villages. The reasons for my stand are explained above. But with the efforts of government and the pelebians these can be preserved anywhere even in cities too.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
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Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11157894737 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71497506661 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448421052632 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 776.7 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
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Words per sentence: 19.7916666667 20.6045352989 96% => OK
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Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832370829909 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685692388903 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159704189287 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028404195029 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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