Many people think that money brings happiness, but others think that having too much money is a problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Money is important to live qualify life but not everything in life. Therefore, people believe that money plays an important role to be happier. However, there is also an opinion also that filth wealth spoils the life. I certainly believe that money bring some happiness in one’s life and i shall explain why it is so.
People who believe that money spoils the life have some valid arguments. First and foremost, too much wealth generates unwanted hobbies. It is commonly seen that rich people do not find place to spend the money and sometimes incline towards the unrealistic hobbies or goal which lead them to deterioration in life. Secondly, abundant money also turns people to become reckless and sometimes it cost their life also. For example, Brazil prime minister who belongs to rich family, helped rich people to get government contract and was later imprisoned for life. Finally, possessing wealth in some country gives the feeling that everything can be bought including the laws of country. As a result, people get trapped in laws and severe punishment.
Despite of dis-benefits of having too much money, people follow the money for following reasons. The main reason is that all necessities can only be fulfilled only by money. As such people have different parameters to measure happiness but common standard that everyone agrees is fulfillment of bare minimum things in life. Moreover, quality life, medical facilities and good education makes people happy up-to some extent. In addition to this, everyone loves to go outside, visit different places, wear good cloths, eat tasty foods etc. and in order to do this, money is required.
To conclude, although happiness can be achieved in different manner, the most common way to achieve this is to live the life fullest and for that money is required to go out, visit places, eat at restaurant etc. Nevertheless too much money may bring arrogance, recklessness and other bad hobbies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10903426791 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56238435996 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563862928349 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7805903325 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3157894737 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229220584392 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824343511525 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649418481463 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149884708181 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152298445433 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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