Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The claim linking the development of a nation directly with its major cities is based on the reason rife with a proper basis. Thus, I condemn the above stated reason that a nation’s cultural traditions are solely preserved and generated in its major cities. A major part of traditions and cultures mostly hail from the countryside, villages and heritage towns.
When it comes to funding and providing financial support to the major cities of a country in order to preserve its cultures, this is purely an assumption based on a mere outlook of politicians that the traditions were also generated in the cities. For instance, the international tourism packages include many countryside towns as the natural flora and fauna of a nation are mostly found in the undeveloped towns and villages. Also the tourism industry, for example, like of a diverse country like India, focuses majorly on the underdeveloped areas of the country where the traditions and long lived cultures are purely preserved as they are inherited from generations to generations.
Firstly, a nation’s primary and creative occupations such as painting, agriculture, other such worldly professions are inherently taken up by individuals who have had an upbringing in a remote town or city. Also, when a consensus about declaring a nation as first, second or third world country is made, it takes into account the nation’s overall development and not only the major cities.
Secondly, a nation in order to thrive in all aspects of profession, education, tourism, and well being of families; has to focus on all corners of the country and thus financially supporting them. We can take for instance, the traditional dance forms of a nation are primarily determined by the preserved cultures of the natives of the country. Perhaps it is also mandatory for the major cities to thrive and develop at an extraordinary pace as for the technological and educational developments so as to compete well with the other countries in these fields (such as nuclear development). It is said that the future of a country lies in the hands of its young ones, although the up-bringing involves all kind of aspects including the cultural and traditional knowledge.
Hence, governments must ensure an equal financial support for the major cities as well as the small towns and the countryside in order to preserve the traditions and cultures of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 427, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... in the undeveloped towns and villages. Also the tourism industry, for example, like...
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Line 4, column 497, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...hnological and educational developments so as to compete well with the other countries i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thus, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13670886076 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99786817381 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498734177215 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9908660857 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.076923077 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3846153846 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 5.21951772744 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311756889706 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121732401363 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880644439499 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203590820847 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984124323407 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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