People have always been concerned about having a job with a fantastic time schedule. Some people prefer to work harder in some days and be free in the rest of the days of a week and others prefer to work every single day of a week. In my view, I personally like to work three days a week for longer hours. Many people believes that this way has more advantages as well.
First and foremost, people could have manageable schedule. Indeed, they can manage their time, because they have enough time to spend for variety of activities. In fact, they have an open schedule and they can set some goals in their life and try to get them in a smooth road. For instance, a worker who works three days a week in a factory can study as well. He or she is not stock with his or her job position. He or she can learn something in the meanwhile. Additionally, this option has a big role in many people's lives, because many people especially in big and modern cities cannot afford school expenses before finding a job. It is a good opportunity for them to study in their work years.
Second of all, busy businesses have an opportunity to produce their product faster. For instance, imagine a factory with 400 employees. That factory can produce n number of a good with that many employees. If they hire 800 people, they can increase their production really fast. As a matter of fact, finding a night shift worker is not easy, but by this new plan, all workers can work during morning and afternoon and the company can improve itself. Furthermore, scientists found out that people work harder in a competitive environment. By increasing the number of employees in that company, workers will be more motivated in their tasks. Consequently, there is a big possibility for people to be better than before.
Last but not least, these free days will create a good time for families to be together. Psychologically, employees need to have fun with their family and their friends to be fresh for the next working day. Having a whole day off will help them to make a good relationship with their family. In general, work atmosphere and job related issues are not easy. Those are sophisticated in most of times, but something is obvious for any person and it is about the relationship inside each family. All of modern life styles persuade people to be far away from each other and they do not have enough energy to spend time with each other. In fact, these new plans will create a situation for parents to be more relaxing in their life and paying attention to their child.
To sum up, having longer work days is not only pleasant for employees, but also is useful for employers and families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to school'
Suggestion: to school
... in big and modern cities cannot afford school expenses before finding a job. It is a ...
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Line 7, column 385, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the times') or simply say ''most times''.
Suggestion: most of the times; most times
...re not easy. Those are sophisticated in most of times, but something is obvious for any perso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, well, while, for instance, in fact, in general, as a matter of fact, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2202.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5875 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50357730169 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48125 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.454273157 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6428571429 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.67857142857 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266923326295 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820562842576 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692371857197 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189929426387 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728027552075 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.