You are due to start new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
• Explain your situation
• Describe your problems
• Tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing concerning the position of software engineer that I am due to begin next Saturday.
As you know, I currently work for my uncle’s accounting company, and you will remember from my interview that I have gained valuable experience there. Unfortunately, my uncle, has had to go into hospital for an operation and there is no one during his absence to manage his affairs.
He has asked me, as this time is a particularly busy time of year, to stay on and manage his company and his staffs in this time. I realize this will be inconvenient to you, but very much hope that, given the circumstances, you would be prepared to allow me to take up my position with you two weeks later than planned.
I would like to emphasize that I remain very keen to work with you, and that I will be gaining further useful experience during this time.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Maryam Ahmadi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... useful experience during this time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69047619048 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7013056388 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8555686499 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23098844771 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101064489327 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773322962075 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111645199248 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431578331055 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.