In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , even
...nk that it is better to do the work fast,even though if some risks were developed. Pe...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... opinion is educational and financial. Nowadays people should learn every thing...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Students
...ple should learn every thing correctly. students in schools or univeristies should be ta...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n the begining, I start to work fast as i can, because our pharmacy is too busy a...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n, because our pharmacy is too busy and i can not accommodate the work condition ...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e that I did many mistakes and my manger notify me. so i decided to work slowly a...
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Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y mistakes and my manger notify me. so i decided to work slowly and produce a be...
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Line 3, column 669, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
... work slowly and produce a better work. it ended up that i become more successful,...
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Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...produce a better work. it ended up that i become more successful, I learned more ...
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Line 3, column 748, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ul, I learned more and in the mean time i become faster with little mistakes. tha...
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Line 3, column 786, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: That
...e i become faster with little mistakes. that is why i believe that working too fast ...
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Line 3, column 798, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...aster with little mistakes. that is why i believe that working too fast will comi...
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Line 3, column 835, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...hy i believe that working too fast will coming up with many un favrable mistakes. ...
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Line 3, column 850, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun un seems to be countable; consider using: 'many '.
Suggestion: many
...at working too fast will coming up with many un favrable mistakes. in our wor...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: In
...th many un favrable mistakes. in our world the work is the main source t...
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Line 8, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Companies
...b to risks, that may lead to huge lose. companies hire employees for their entir lives be...
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Line 8, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...the compaines, but what happen if those employees danger the companies than benefit it, ...
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Line 8, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ines, but what happen if those employees danger the companies than benefit it, th...
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Line 8, column 373, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Losing
...nefit it, the compaines will fire them. losing of money is danger not only to the comp...
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Line 8, column 449, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: For
...o the company but also to the employee. for example i have one of my friends who is...
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Line 8, column 515, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: He
...my friends who is working in a company. he was very carless about the company. he ...
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Line 8, column 554, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: He
... he was very carless about the company. he dose not care if the company lose or ga...
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Line 8, column 557, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doses'.
Suggestion: doses
... was very carless about the company. he dose not care if the company lose or gain. h...
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Line 8, column 600, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...e not care if the company lose or gain. he always do the work in hurry, he want to...
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Line 8, column 600, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e not care if the company lose or gain. he always do the work in hurry, he want to...
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Line 8, column 610, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... if the company lose or gain. he always do the work in hurry, he want to done with...
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Line 8, column 635, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ain. he always do the work in hurry, he want to done with his work even if the work ...
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Line 8, column 696, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... work even if the work will promote some financial risk to the company. it ended ...
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Line 8, column 729, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
...te some financial risk to the company. it ended up that the company fired him aft...
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Line 8, column 809, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: That
...fter he made a big lose to the company. that is why i consider working slowly is th...
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Line 8, column 816, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... made a big lose to the company. that is why i consider working slowly is the bes...
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Line 8, column 822, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...a big lose to the company. that is why i consider working slowly is the best. ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: In
...sider working slowly is the best. in conclusion, working slowly is more impo...
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Line 11, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Working
...uctive for the person and for the work. working too fast will danger the company and w...
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Line 11, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the work. working too fast will danger the company and will lead to a huge lose...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4400921659 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4092712841 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44930875576 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1115302144 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.08 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.36 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.5376344086 632% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243422025356 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076485568229 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768874798017 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172136573354 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520265820927 0.0645574589148 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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