Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Nowadays, the number of offenders who commit a crime is on the increase. It is obvious that the main causes for committing a crime are poverty, unemployment and lack of education. Governments should think up ideas to tackle this problem by taking measures such as providing vocational trainings or rehabilitating programs.
There are several reasons that are causing crime in each society. In many cases the criminals re-offend a crime because they have no other way for making a living. In addition, criminal record makes finding a job more difficult. Moreover, offenders mix with other prisoners in the prison, who have negative effects and can make the situation worse. As an example, a prisoner who gets into the jail because of drug dealing can motivates a thief to test some kinds of drugs to be more relax in the prison.
Some measures should be taken by the governments and the offenders’ family and friends to tackle this problem. Firstly, prisons should provide skills, education and vocational training which can be beneficial for the prisoners to find job after they release. Secondly, Community service is another way to reform offenders and it can make them more useful for the society. For instance, by cleaning public areas or talking to schools. Lastly, Family and friends should help them with accommodation and work.
To conclude, lack of welfare and education in the society will cause different types of crimes and criminals are in danger of temptation to re-offend so governments and relatives should provide facilities that help the offenders to find a job and overcome the difficulties after they release.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'motivate'
Suggestion: motivate
...to the jail because of drug dealing can motivates a thief to test some kinds of drugs to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17228464419 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81157932978 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7824915224 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264901808789 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877501581746 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718421562493 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15659372263 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130218072495 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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