Both the reading and the lecture discuss the authenticity whether the Dinasours are endotherms or not. The reading stated that the diansours are endotherms and it provides three points of support. However, the lecture casts doubts on all these claims and it opposes all the author's points.
First of all, the reading claims that diansors are endotherms because they used to live in polar region which is so cold to live there. Only animals who could maintain their body temperature constant ,they could survive in such weather. On the other hand, the lecture opposes this point by explaining that the polar area once was not that much cold, it was warmer. And if it was cold, the dinasors migrated or hibernated.
Second the author avers that there is a connection between the endotherms and the position of the legs. The endotherms have their legs underneath their body including the dinasor. However, the lecture contrasts this idea by saying that it is true the dinasor's legs underneath their body to support the body weight, rather than doing physical activities like other endotherms do.
Finally, the reading states that there is a connection between the endotherms and bone structure since the endotherms bone structure have Haversian canal. The fossils include the Haversian canal which prove that the diansors are endotherm. In contrast, the lecture refutes this idea by saying that it is true that the diansor has haversian canal, but also it has growth rings which means that the growth of the diansor is not constant in cold region. However, the endotherms grow rapidly in the cold environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, in contrast, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11278195489 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48132831764 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492481203008 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0263528279 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293944521573 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111269748401 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062128671174 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172980551355 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621937068776 0.0443174109184 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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