Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about how much information we can share in the fields of science, business and academy. While I accept that some information should not be opened to the public because of its significance, I agree that the rest of other information could be shared free of charge and it would be much more beneficial to the society.
There are a number of reasons why people are reluctant to share knowledge with others. When it comes to business, some information related to new products, functions or designs is regarded as valuable assets. By developing these knowledge and skills, a company could make a great hit in the market, which might lead to a big success as well as a huge profit. If any of this information was disclosed to the public in advance, competitors could easily copy or imitate its distinctive features of the products. With regard to scientists and researchers, they devoted their entire life to studying and investigating in their chosen field, so their achievements should be provided sufficient rewards such as the patent or copyright to their goals. Moreover, some technological skills, like making nuclear bombs, are too dangerous to open to the public.
Even though the information mentioned above might be hard to disclose to the ordinary people, I believe that there are still a lot of knowledge which could be shared to the world. Due to the development of technology and globalization, the power of collective knowledge is much stronger than the past. A wide range of people from different fields can cooperate with each other to make great progress in various fields. For example, some IT companies made public their own codes without any conditions in order to show their technological excellence as well as to accept useful advice related to errors or improvements. Apart from this, a few of famous chefs have provided their secret recipe freely nowadays, which contributes to the popularization of cooking and consequently broaden the domain of cooking market.
In conclusion, although there are some specific information that should be keep as a confidential, I argue that our society could benefit greatly by sharing a lot of knowledge as much as possible and collaborating with each other using it.
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- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'these knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; these knowledges
...arded as valuable assets. By developing these knowledge and skills, a company could make a grea...
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Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...dying and investigating in their chosen field, so their achievements should be provid...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'kept'?
Suggestion: kept
...ome specific information that should be keep as a confidential, I argue that our soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0752688172 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92252644605 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551075268817 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1194491557 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.857142857 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27991837199 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934984439894 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780099684843 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189351172885 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682185984671 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.