The bar chart below shows defence spending in 5 countries.
The column chart above describes the budget taken from GDP for defence in 5 different countries in 2005 and 2010.
It is clear from the table that while Saudi Arabia and USA witnessed an increase in the percentage of GDP in 2010, the other three listed countries reduce or remain the percentage of GDP for defence.
In 2005, Saudi Arabia was the country spending the most of GDP on army among 5 countries mentioned with 8.2 whereas Japan spent least on defence with 1%. By 2010, while Saudia Arabia had increased their budget for army with nearly 2%, Japan had remained the same as they were in 2005. Besides, even though the percentage of GDP that American used to spend on defence was nearly a half of Saudia Arabia in both year shown, they were still in the second place.
With 0.8% higher than France’s percentage, India taken the third highest place of percentage for defence. Accidentally, both India and France had experienced a slight decrease in 2010 with 0.2% and 0.3% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The column chart above describes the budget taken from G...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the least'.
Suggestion: spent the least
...ntries mentioned with 8.2 whereas Japan spent least on defence with 1%. By 2010, while Saud...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n 2010 with 0.2% and 0.3% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, still, third, whereas, while, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79768786127 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46631894239 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589595375723 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.423221711 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0782421221613 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417937025087 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048895958217 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499058121159 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050970470921 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.