Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The way I live today is very different with the way my parents's life because we are live in dissimilar era. There are some explanation about the differences that I want to share here.

I live in twenty century which offers kind of technology such computer and hand phone. I get easy when I want to communicate with other people around me. Also, I obtain more information even every second with technology. I get another information source from internet. I have my own computer and I just connect it with modem then I can browse the information on internet. On the other hand, in my parents's life, technology did not developed well. People in past time was sent information by mail. I could imagine, the time was more longer than now, it could took about five days to knew that information.

Today, many telecommunication provides offer the easiest to relate to each other. I often getting confuse while I am choosing it. They provides low price and a lot of rewards if I use it. In contrast, in eighteen century, I can count that it is just one provider who offers it. It is because the limitation of people knowledge about advantage technology such as computer and cellular phone. Thus, there is no choice then they all use mail to know people's condition.

In my view, I personally like the way I live nowadays because of the easiness. I love the way I can connect with my society faster. Also, I can gather many information such as news with internet connection.

To conclude, I collect better and faster information using advance technology because it affects to better next generations. In conclusion, the way I and my parent's life is not same anymore. It is all because time and technology is changing. I totally love the way I live today.

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Sentence: I could imagine, the time was more longer than now, it could took about five days to knew that information.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to to and knew

Sentence: I often getting confuse while I am choosing it.
Description: A verb, present participle or gerund is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to getting and confuse

Sentence: They provides low price and a lot of rewards if I use it.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to They and provides

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