Nowadays, people pay more attention to protecting culture and environment and the possibility of "responsible tourist", but many people believe that it is impossible to be a "responsible tourist'. Do you agree or disagree?
Protection of culture and environment become an urgent task in our life. Some people think that people pay more attention to environmental and cultural preservation instead of educating tourists to become responsible while others claim that it is possible and important to be responsible tourists if our ambience want to be protected. I partly agree with this statement for the following reasons.
There are some reasons why cultural and environmental conservation is addressed attensively. By virtue of cultural identity, each nation can appeal to the greater number of tourists around the world, follow by their greater profits.Besides, the government find it easier to control marco-issues like environmental problems through harsher policies rather than supervise and educate people in turn. In addition, such profits gained from the effort to promote cultural and environmental could ultilized to restore tradition and preserve heritage attraction. This again benefits local people and nation in turn and the long-term.
Nevertheles, without being responsible tourists, I strongly believe that the effort to protect tradition cultural and environment hardly paid off. It makes sense that laws will not be effective if our citizen, especially foreigner tourists, pay no attention to their behavior. In some eco-areas which suffered the most serious damage, it is the main culprit affecting environment. Hence, how to become such educated tourist? Through strictly policies by authorities, each citizen, whether the local or international will be imbued with the idea of protecting the place they visit. A simple action to show that idea is that no sooner do they finish their meals than they just put rubbish into the basket. Furthermore, instead of trying to touch directly natural resources, they can come to other country to watch, enjoy and share experience. All in all, being a responsible tourists demands a person to comply with environment rule, not damage their historical relics.
In conclusion, both government and citizen should be aware that for the long-term tourism industry, cultural and environmental protection play a key role when policies by the former and actions by the latter are hand in hand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
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Line 5, column 875, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tourist'?
Suggestion: tourist
...rience. All in all, being a responsible tourists demands a person to comply with environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50145772595 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9718624249 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588921282799 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1452733618 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.9375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23167651594 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699089601985 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771711210161 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14206486533 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962394079499 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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