Some people think men and women have different natural abilities that make them suitable for different types of work. Others, however, believe that both men and women can be equally suited to do any type of work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the present days, men and women equality is a contentious issue. Some people think that women are more delicate then men and they need to choose their profession accordingly. However, others think that men and women have same physical and mental abilities and they can choose any career prospect. This essay will discuss both aspects before making any conclusion.
Today, in many countries such as Mexico and Kenya, women and men choose different profession, and pay scale for men and women are equal. They believe that men are physically and mentally very strong; they are more suitable for the...
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Sentence: In the present days, men and women equality is a contentious issue.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to women and equality
Sentence: Some people think that women are more delicate then men and they need to choose their profession accordingly.
Description: The word then is not usually used as an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to then
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Need to develop the sentences smoothly and still have grammar issues.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 290 350
No. of Characters: 1399 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.127 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.824 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.395 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.059 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.034 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.765 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.394 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.554 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5