Write a letter to a sports club manager complaining about the club. In your letter write
- What do you like about the center
- Mention the problems that you have had there
- Give your view on how to solve those problems
Dear Sir,
I am Jaineel Patel and the platinum member of your sports center. I am writing this letter to draw an attention; there is some issue in the sports center, which needs your sight.
Your sports center has amazing facilities and well the latest sports equipment. Moreover, I really loved the gym area and the cricket ground, which is regularly maintained and has well knowledge coach. However, there is some issue in some area such as Badminton and Table Tannins has limited equipment, the air-conditioner is not working in the guest room. In addition, some of the staff has misbehaved and they are not on time to guide us.
I feel that there should be immediate action need to take on your side to resolve the issue. In Badminton and Table Tennis require the more equipment and need maintenance; replace the guest room air-conditioner and strict instruction and rules for the staff member. I would like if you give me the commitment that these topics will not arise again in future.
Hope for a promote action from you regarding this matter.
Regards,
Jaineel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...working in the guest room. In addition, some of the staff has misbehaved and they are not o...
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Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... that these topics will not arise again in future. Hope for a promote action from you...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...not arise again in future. Hope for a promote action from you regarding this matter. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, well, i feel, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57000290541 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614130434783 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1172481955 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161321742825 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584401205067 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064447236458 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972906582005 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634527216218 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.