It is said that a perfect society is the ideal place to live in. However, it is difficult to define an ideal society as it is viewed in varied ways. This essay will discuss the most essential key element of an ideal society and different attitudes of individuals toward achieving it.
An ideal soceity comprises of numerous factors such as access to education, equal rights for men and women, provision of employment for members of society, high quality standard of living, low crime rates, low morbidity and low mortality rate. However, I find education is the most important element for an ideal nation.
With free access to education, the literacy rate would increase in society and its members would be defined, producing more professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. There would also be more skilled workers. Because of this, it would attract local and foreign investors which would create jobs. If employment is high, it would improve the quality of life of every individual and family in the community.
The health sector would improve and the public would have knowledge in terms of health care. This would lower the number of illnesses and deaths in society.
Low crime rates would also be attained as people tend to commit crimes and other wrongdoings due to poverty. Given the same benefits for both gender, it would develop a fair, unbiased community. There would be opportunities for women to improve themselves and pursue a career which could help them especially those single mothers who struggle to raise their children.
In a nutshell, all the elements given are interlinked with one another but generally, education plays a vital role in the shaping of an ideal society. To help achieve this, each individual has his own duty and obligation to obey the laws of the government and be aware of his surroundings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...oward achieving it. An ideal soceity comprises of numerous factors such as access to educ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02931596091 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60080535209 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4058140868 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1875 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246967776952 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859055304209 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732532205499 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12021590156 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965565614197 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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