University are the height education center in any country, most of the research and invention are occur in university. If we want better result from university student we need to invest lot of money to infrastructure and physical development. Some cases faculty member and administrator think that most of the money should invested to faculty member. I my view, i think university should invest most of the money for infrastructure and physical plant. My view goes as follows reasons.
First of all, education facility is most important measurement scale of social, economic, environmental development of a country. If infrastructure is well developed it motivated student to do better and think better. It will give them better opportunity to planning and think new innovative think. For example, when i am a second year student i was proposed a new topic “design an effective drainage plan for any city " it will net a update lab and GIS software, but on that time lab facility are not available in my university. So teachers are refused to do that research. After 2 year later lab facility are available than i can manage myself to do that research.
In addition, Teacher are most important source of knowledge for that reason, if university are decided to invest lots of money to keep faculty satisfied it will be a wrong step. Because, faculty member are not able to teach student without better infrastructure and update technical facility. if faculty member are more educated and effective it will great advantage to student If we want to take 100 percent from the student we also need to invest for their better education.
Finally, ranking of university are depend on it facility, infrastructure, physical development structure, lab facility, administrative facility, research, thesis and faculty professor stuff. If we think about the ranking of a university we should need to invest lots of money in infrastructure and physical plant.
In sum, above the discussion it is clear that if we invest on infrastructure and physical plant it will bring more beneficial than investing faculty members satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Suggestion: occurred
... most of the research and invention are occur in university. If we want better result...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Suggestion: innovative
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Suggestion: depended
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...investing faculty members satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1676300578 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07955266648 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473988439306 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3708495477 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.176470588 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290272656346 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101615215654 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988070834735 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199451880461 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877799005075 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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