Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Your opinion- good or bad
Due to westernization and globalization, the idea of shopping malls is widely spread in almost all the cities.Every city now has a shopping mall.A shopping mall is a place where all the things like clothing, food, electronic equipment, household things, music, entertainment, etc.
After such a hectic schedule, people do not want to wander places buying different things rather they prefer places where they could get all the things easily and at the same place. This place is a mall. People prefer branded things more because of its durability which is available in these malls.Moreover, they also get a discount on various items. People try to get fresh vegetables and fruits rather than searching in the market when there is not much price difference.So, they prefer mall more than other items.
Thus, it has greatly affected the lives of the owners of these small shops. These shops are the only source of income for their families to carry out their expenditures. the decline in their business is greatly affecting their lives.Moreover, it is a big problem for the startups who could not afford such branded shops. It is also affecting the lives of farmers who after so much hard work are not able to gain much to run their family.As a result, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92376681614 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72320286048 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57399103139 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.956602978 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120963927423 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569866143538 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575994254754 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882344586904 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574327174331 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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