TPO32-(version2)
Living in the society with a galloping rate of development, no one can turn a blind eye to recent debates over whether young people today have impact on important issues. Different people hold different views due to their distinct backgrounds and perspectives. Some people adhere to the point that youngsters make no difference to significant problems of the society while others believe that young people are actually of great importance over those issues. This contention is so complicated and controversial that it is impossible to find a universal answer to the question. Nevertheless, to some extent, I am firmly leaning towards the latter. The following argumentation can substantially verify my standpoint.
Firstly, the youth is admittedly playing a crucial role in today's society through the internet, especially those worldwide social networks. For instance, Mark Zuckerberg is co-founder and CEO of the social-networking website Facebook, the user base of which has grown to more than two billion people, also one of the world's youngest billionaires. He founded the social-networking website Facebook out of his college dormitory room. Since then, Mark Zuckerberg can be credited with giving millions of people around the world a new way to stay connected with friends and family and to discover what's going on in their communities. He is actually changing the world's view and perspective of the current society.
On top of that, I want to point out that young people are showed to be much more enthusiastic and energetic than older ones. They care about the development of nowadays society, the living condition of the people in poverty, the interaction between countries, the solutions to deal with the environmental problems. Take my friend as an example, once she saw a piece of news that the government is going to build a dam over a river, which is proved to be harmful to the environment as well as the climate, in her hometown. She made up her mind immediately to boycott this plan by holding a demonstration. In merely three days, she gathered about a thousand people to back up her viewpoint by joining the parade, which can perfectly demonstrate that young people today can be a rallying point for the society.
Granted, we shall never neglect that there happen to be less young people in the headquarters or the decision-making group of important social issues. Thus, some people seem like live under the illusion that youngsters are of no use to their country as well as the society. However, they fail to take into account the fact that young people influenced those decisions to a great extent through various ways without acting as the decision maker. That they maybe not the decision maker of a party or the government cannot lead to the conclusion that they have no influence on the issues.
Overall, I believe that young people are playing a vital role in determining the future of our society as a whole, which has been empirically proven by the above statements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the youngest'.
Suggestion: worlds the youngest
...han two billion people, also one of the worlds youngest billionaires. He founded the social-net...
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Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...with friends and family and to discover whats going on in their communities. He is ac...
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Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ommunities. He is actually changing the worlds view and perspective of the current soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, on top of that, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2510.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05030181087 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94921365987 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53722334004 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1659546119 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.523809524 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.