The graph shows the proporion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three countries, such as: USA, Switzerland and Japan. The X-axis shows the percentage of people aged 65 and over, and the Y-axis indicates years. Overall, the percentage of people in USA and Switzerland is alike up to 2040 but Japanese is quite different.
From 1940 to 1960 the propotion in population of Sweden and USA goes from 5,5 % up to 10 %, while in Japan it had been changing from the former 5 % to lower (about 2-3 %). From the 1960 the population in USA and Switzerland had been going up by the 1997. Although, the results of Japan were unpleasant and had been descending up to the 1987. Starting from that point it began to increase. In the USA the persentage of population had no changes at all properly from the 1997 by the 2018. Whereas, the growth stroke the graph surprisingly from 13 % in 1996 to 20 % in 2017. Japan's graph has risen high mark in a shortest period of time (from 2029 to 2040). For 11 years the score has grown from the poor 10% up to the highest one in 2040 27 %. Evaluations of the Sweden and USA grow up from 16-17 % in 2029 to the highest 23-25 %.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...all properly from the 1997 by the 2018. Whereas, the growth stroke the graph surprising...
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Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...17. Japans graph has risen high mark in a shortest period of time from 2029 to 20...
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Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...graph has risen high mark in a shortest period of time from 2029 to 2040. For 11 years the sco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3732718894 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43822976088 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52534562212 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4479291396 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220168697882 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916651746767 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148883788719 0.0843802449381 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241807612918 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169943287292 0.0819641961636 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.