The underwater noises which called “quackers” are strange and people make several theories to explain them. On the contrary, the speaker points that all the theories have arguments.
To begin with, the claim that quackers are the calls of ocra whales seems plausible, however, it is highly unlikely. The professor asserts that ocra whales live in the surface water not the deep ocean where the submarines remain. Also, even if there are orca whales, submarines could detect nearby whales by sonar. So orca whales cannot be the sources of the quackers.
Then, according to the author, quackers are caused by giant squid that is also again by the speaker. She tells us that if this theory is true, we could always hear the strange sound because giant squids are still alive. In fact, quackers which started in the 1960s disappeared after 1980s. Thus it is not a reasonable theory.
In addition, the speaker also disapproves the third theory that they come from military technology like other country’s submarines. No submarines have the ability to change the directions so quickly. She also illustrates that till now, we have not own the technology to build a submarine with both fast speed and silent engines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...d in the 1960s disappeared after 1980s. Thus it is not a reasonable theory. In ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, then, third, thus, in addition, in fact, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 202.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11386138614 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6908342866 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638613861386 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2692063337 49.2860985944 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4615384615 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06452816374 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326979796713 0.272083759551 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950717872601 0.0996497079465 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480621491729 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165387698667 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03954714499 0.0443174109184 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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