The pie-charts elucidate the amount of water consumed for three different purpose (industrial, agricultural and domestic use) in six different countries.
Overall, agricultural consumption of water is comparatively higher in four different countries whereas industrial and domestic use of water in these same countries is significantly low. In contrast, industrial use of water in two countries (North America and Europe) is slightly half of total percentage and other one half is shared for two purposes (agricultural and domestic use).
In countries like South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia use of water for agricultural purpose is remarkably high in percentage (71%, 84%, 85% and 81% respectively). However, industrial consumption of water in countries like North America and Europe is slightly high (48% and 53% respectively) than other two purposes agriculture and domestic use.
Meanwhile, consumption of water for domestic purpose is significantly less in the countries like North America, Europe and South America (13%, 15% and 7% respectively). In contrast, use of water for industrial purpose in some countries like South America, Africa and Central Asia is moderately low than domestic use (10%, 7% and 5% respectively).
- Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environmental protection, while others believe more benefits have been brought to international business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USAsince 1980 with projections until 2030 56
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- should woman be reponsible for children misbehavior 63
- In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt of water consumed for three different purpose industrial, agricultural and dom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59788359788 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16480852336 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407407407407 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 12.1755861444 43.030603864 28% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 151.142857143 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191230667826 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123370630745 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536931156921 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15716144143 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516283932386 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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