It is thought by some people that environmental conservation has been benefited by global cooperation. On other hand, some people think global cooperation has promoted international trade and business than protection of environment. In my opinion, I strongly believe that international relationship between countries have inevitably flourished trade and trade and business more than considering environmental issues.
Strong and mutual relationship between countries have promoted environmental protection by creating global awareness about global warming, preservation of natural habitat of rare animals and detrimental effect of nuclear energy through different campaigns and efforts. The rich nation has been connected to poor nation by mutual cooperation and influenced each country to consider environmental issues.
On other hands, global relationship between countries have promoted the growth of multinational business and created lucrative business environment all over world. Another big advantage is to get potential cheap labours, for instance, the biggest information technology company 'Apple' has all its production in China as the wages of labour and other development cost like electricity and material cost is low. Therefor, both the countries are tremendously benefited by each other, as 'Apple' has low production cost which have helped to gain huge profit margins, while people of China are getting jobs and their government are adding up national economy through tax on the development and sales of each item of products.
To sum up, I would like to say that international cooperation is essential for the mutual benefits of countries, thus has significant positive effects on their economy and also create a new horizon of opportunities for their people.
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- Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environmental protection, while others believe more benefits have been brought to international business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80534351145 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1585647196 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5662206257 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.0 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1111111111 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237294541336 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110695731042 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737429085135 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140311533833 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964024617521 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.01 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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