To deal with any projects, the first is to get information from many different news resources and then to take strategies. There is no doubt that information is really a crucial factor to be successful, especially when the highly developed society and the benefits of making decisions are considered.
To begin with, the society is changing in an unbelievable speed that many different news resources to update your information are necessary, or the out-of-date information is just useless even harmful. For example, Jobs found that more and more people need smart phones due to the latest survey from the Internet. Thus he decided to give up all the traditional phones and investe a new kind of smart phones. As we all know, this is a great decision making Apple become one of the most wealth companies. On the contrary, Nokie still kept on the out-of-date news that people just need phones to call others not surf the Internet according to their old customers. Soon, this company came to its end. Just by many resources, you could get the latest news.
Moreover, the more resources you own, the more benefits you get. In fact, it is almost impossible to get the whole knowledge that you need from one resource. No one resource can offer the whole truth you need and you only get parts of facts that it cannot give you the best strategy and even lead you into a wrong way. Take myself as an instance, I usually bought books from the library in the past. But there are always some books that I couldn’t find due to the fact that just two small libraries located in my city. Since I found the online shopping websites like Amazon and Dangdang, the situation has changed a lot. You can find various kinds of books in these websites and you don’t need to worry about looking for books which takes people a lot of time. So it benefits you a lot if you have more different resources.
Admittedly, time is wasted during looking for different resources and many of them are not helpful at all. But it saves more time comparing with the little time of looking for different resources and gives you more benefits by combining all the useful information you get. In fact, getting information from many different news resources is far better than from one resource in most cases.
Due to the aforementioned ground, I insist on the necessary of getting information from many different news resources.
- TPO-44 - Integrated Writing Task In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to 65
- TPO-44 - Integrated Writing Task In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to 61
- TPO-27 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and ex 60
- TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-40 - Independent Writing Task Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... changing in an unbelievable speed that many different news resources to update your informati...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...to the latest survey from the Internet. Thus he decided to give up all the tradition...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e necessary of getting information from many different news resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, still, then, thus, for example, in fact, kind of, no doubt, in most cases, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58559320705 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9267799298 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09523809524 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225583096907 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794589953056 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731045647086 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15985736975 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041072001622 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.