In my opinion, the ability to plan and organize is really essential for modern people, especially for young people who want to save time and money.
To begin with, if you have a good plan, you can finish your work with less time than who do not have a plan. This is crucial in modern world for people all have lots of things to be done not like ancient people who just have one or two things in one day. For example, young people have to replay e-mails, view your twitter and call phones. These may seem not important at all, but in fact, you have to waste lots of time to deal with these things. Not alone you have to finish your work or study. But if you have a good plan, you can easily deal with these unimportant things in your free time before or after you finish some big work when people just waste their time. What’s more, it is also important for your work. Like my brother Jim who once worked for one of the biggest Chinese company named Tencent, never tried to have plan something. Though he was talented, with lots of hard tasks, he couldn’t finish all these in time. In the end, unfortunately, he was fired by the company.
Then this ability can also save money for young people. As we all know, we have to see all kinds of advertisements in almost everywhere, thus causing us to waste lots of money to buy something which are useless for us, especially for young people who can’t control themselves well. But if we have the ability to plan and organize, we can know whether it is useful for us because we already have a plan. For instance, I used to buy lots of things each time I surf the Internet. However, lots of things are never be used. I have to make a shopping list before I surf the Internet so that I can use money effectively.
What’s more, because of this list, I can prepare for the sale day. As an example, I used waste thousands of money on snakes on the double eleven day when all the things are on sale on the Internet. In fact, I just ate parts of these snakes. After I had the ability to plan, I just spent no more than one hundred yuan.
In a conclusion, the ability to plan and organize which can save time and money is a vital skill in the present world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...an finish your work with less time than who do not have a plan. This is crucial in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30476190476 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26265150581 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442857142857 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1623079762 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1818181818 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249021054015 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802373915683 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660121652779 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140610128897 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697738717866 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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