Nowadays, the importance of education is conceived more and more by Societies. With all this, it's still a question whether parents are having a more significant role in their children's education than the parents in the past. Although, this idea might not sound concordant to everybody, in my point of view, parents are much more caring in terms of their children's education than foretime. I will support my idea in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, I believe that today parents are rather educated than the parents in the past. Most of the parents, at least, have a college education. Parents know how much education helped them to be successful and they want this to happen for their children too. Furthermore, a knowledgeable parent is abler to assist his child in school works, as opposed to the past that most parents could not even read and write. For instance, my grandparents were always support their children to go to school and study, however, they were illiterate like the most people in their generation. Consequently, these parents couldn't help even if they wanted to. Therefore, most parents today are more knowledgeable and capable of helping their children than the past.
My second argument is that, I think the value of having education and college degrees got more vital in the present time. People's values have changed. In the old times, people had different wishes and life standards. For example, parents wanted their children to grow up and work in the farms with their parents and children also were happy with this. There was no media and television to influence them and their life paths. But in our contemporary societies, parents and children have access to the media that advocates education. A good example can raise from myself, few days ago I watched a viral clip of a three years old child that with her mother's help could learn all the countries’ names and the details of each one of them along with all the periodic elements. It wowed me, and now I always think I will do the same with my child and I think I am not the only one who is influenced by this clip.
To sum up, due to aforementioned ground, I think that parents now are much more involved and caring about their children’s education. This can be a result of a more educated parent or the worthiness of education is much more realized by people, especially parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...generation. Consequently, these parents couldnt help even if they wanted to. So I think...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
...es, parents and children have access to a media that advocates education. A good exampl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, at least, for example, for instance, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70250506215 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49512195122 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1233680401 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5238095238 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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