Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree?
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Some individuals believed that unsafe sports should be banned while other people does not support this. In my own perspective, I assent to the foregoing argument for the reason that it is definitely risky to life and there are other sports one can embrace in.
To begin with, physical recreations that are perilous to ones life should be avoided. The fact that it can take away a person's life in just a minute is unjustifiable. Moreover, training which fosters players endurance and agility may lead to being dangerous in itself. One of the sporting event I believe is not safe is car racing wherein racers would often have an accident while driving. More so, it is indeed not healthy and a reflection that supporters of dangerous sports does not value life.
Apart from this, the are still options to choose from into the field of sports for an athlete may want to venture in. It not necessary to immerse them in those life-threatening activities that would only lead them to eventually an injury or worse than death. It is a matter of support from the government that would boost these players more vivid in their chosen arena of recreation.
In conclusion, sports should a form of entertainment a measure of ones skills and talent and to be competitive with the other players of the same objective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ld a form of entertainment a measure of ones skills and talent and to be competitive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, still, while, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80088495575 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67785402608 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588495575221 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3028413807 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.6363636364 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227960288959 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868333565424 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077263601773 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146708295279 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720115102869 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.