Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What could be the reason for this trend, and what can be done to reverse it?
Nowadays, one of the most important concerns of government authorities is providing a satisfying health service for the residents of their countries. Although, scientists could achieve excessive successes in various health fields, the overall standards of physical health have been diminished in developed countries which will be the result of people's hectic life style and lack of enough exercise in their daily life. This issue should not be neglected and some measures should be taken to tackle the problem.
One of the main reasons for decreasing the physical health level in developed countries is a worldwide change in people's life style. The hectic pace of life brings anxiety and stress for people which will lead to some diseases such as heart attack or stroke which will be debilitating in the future. Besides, junk food seems more appealing to individuals and they do not have time for a proper homemade meal and as a result their health will be threaten. Moreover, exercise by far is neglected and fellows pay no attention to the strength of their muscles which caused obesity in society, especially among young children.
In order to solve this problem, government should run some campaigns to raise awareness among people about the risks of living an unhealthy life. This would be possible by raising money by taxing working people and educating children at schools. Furthermore, families should try to spend more time with each other and manage to go to the nature on weekends and do some outdoor activities that will improve their health conditions.
To sum up, not only development in healthcare is important, but also people's life style is crucial in terms of having a healthy society. Government can increase the level of physical health in the society by raising awareness among individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15878378378 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66186846713 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7997860858 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209010029724 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800227058199 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569931564589 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130023226558 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606243501402 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.