As English is now the world language and an essential skill in business, English language instruction should begin in kindergarten.'
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Present your ideas and opinions with examples where necessary.
We all know that at the present time English can be definitely recognized as a worldwide spoken language. In general, almost all job vacancies demand a well-developed skills of speaking English. For this reason, some people suggest that English should be introduced to children starting from kindergarten. To my way of thinking, this idea is absolutely essential and effective for enhancing English language skills of our younger generation.
For the great majority of people, it is much more practical to begin learning foreign languages as early as possible. For real, children have more tenacio...
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'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 361 350
No. of Characters: 1772 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.359 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.909 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.743 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.562 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.963 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.562 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5