Job vacancies and hence employers offer different working schedules to their employees. Some of them offer weekly schedules with lower working hours and others offer semi-week working days with higher working hours. I believe having more days off in a week is more enjoyable because it allows individuals to have more time working on their personal project and it helps married employees to spend more time with their family.
Young workers have different dreams and some of them are an innate entrepreneur who will start new job trends if they have enough time to work on their personal projects. Most of these entrepreneurs have to work for somebody else in order to pay the living expenses and pursue their own projects, so having more time allow them to complete their own projects faster. This will make them happy and also benefits the society by making more jobs through their startup. Although they have to work more hours, they have the passion to do it because they want their current job to pursue their dreams not the other way around.
The married employees also enjoy this schedule because they have more time to spend with their family. They can help their wives to do the house chores including repairing households, taking care of children and even they will have time to go to the picnic every week. This person will become happier which results in being even more productive in his or her job. Additionally, a working couple can schedule their work so that there is always one of them is in the house to take care of children.
On the other hand, it may cause some hardship for the employees because the employer might reduce their salary because of days he or she takes off. This is a false cause because in reality the employees actually do their job but the greedy sense of some employers may force them to exploit their workers in this way.
As I mentioned in previous lines, having less working day have benefits but those who choose this way should consider all possible consequences including their employer behavior with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, may, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81971830986 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28650162142 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501408450704 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.3568103205 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242708735776 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107309654222 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577861112295 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157149771869 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767226308577 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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