Do you think how important it is for people to want success in life? Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic?
Everyone wants to do well in the life and succeed in respective field to get fame and of course money. Some people believe that person must have some ambition in life in order to get success. On the other hand, people believe that being too much ambitious creates so many problems in life. In my view, ambition is positive characteristic and every successful people possess this quality.
People who mark ambition as negative quality have some valid reasons. Firstly, people set the ambitions unrealistically sometimes and undergo immense pressure for achieving those. Most of time, unrealistic expectations are not met and people fail to achieve the set targets. For example, my nephew wanted to be singer but did not have good voice so failed miserably and created dis-satisfaction in whole family. Secondly, it is generally seen that even realistic ambitions creates so much stress in life that people sometime people not able to cope it and falls in depression.
However, successful people embrace this characteristic and love to change the set ambitions. It is very common saying that without ambition one can’t get anywhere in life and this seems to be true in almost all cases. Individuals believe that ambition creates the goals which keep the one focused and determined. For instance, famous tennis player Roger Federer had ambitions to be the no-1 tennis player and it motivated him to be physically fit and create techniques in short span of time to defeat others in tournament. Besides this, dream also works as a fuel which drives the person towards the goal and person never feel bored or irritate even if there are some hindrances appear.
To conclude, without goal person may waste the energy and eventually reached nowhere. Therefore, it is always good to have ambitions in life for become successful and I consider this as positive traits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in short, of course, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06493506494 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69772178266 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581168831169 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5202407086 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312436236407 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106606533985 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072464305574 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196962376068 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677887011708 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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