The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts provide information about the consumption of fruit juice and beer in different countries. The data is listed according to one person’s consumption per year. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the beer was consumed more than the fruit juice.
Ireland and Germany got the highest amount of beer consumed. Namely 155 and 119 liters. 106 liters of beer was on average drunk by one person in Austria, which is 8 liters bigger than figures for Belgium, Denmark and UK. The least proportion was consumed in Australia, US, Netherlands and Finland, decreasing from 89 to 79.
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