the expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. do you agree or disagree with this statement?Use specific and examples to support your answer.
first, what is the meaning of goal? does we choose our goal or we fall in goal?. i'am certain the first one is better. personally, if we are free to select our goal, we should never give up it. it mean i am agree with those statement. there are many reaosns to support my anwers whay i believs to sticking goals in every conditions, whether hard or conenient. i tery to explore my reasons in follow.
first and most important reasons in my point of veiw is respecting to our creation. i will explain it more. eventhough, it was not our choice, but we born into this world. we should be a person that influence on the world based on what happen in the world. trying and haveing a goals is neccessary but not enough to be succeed. we should be hard work person and neer giveing up the goal. it is essential to be effectable person in the world. so, to having a goal and more important never give it up, is way to make world as better world and totally mean respect to our creation.
second reason is learning. we may choose a goal that reaching to it is very hard and almost impposible. i mean that tha chance of failuing is more than victory. but if we look more extently, there is also, victory in fail. for example, my intent was continuing my garduation in forieng country. i studied and efforted hardly like learning english n short time, writting article in 2 month, interviewing with professors. finally i couldn't applay, but i took in new things. i becoming as man that trying for every thing in the best way in both quality and quantity aspects. i never was like that. it becuase i had a goal and never throw it away. so, many things can come and learn throuhg a way that we want to go as our intention.
finally, what we want to do if we give up our goal. absultuy,in the future may said: "i wish i come back and try more". there is sentence that we may repeat it a few years latter , if we do not effort ot our goal and give up our target for future. such as my chance in football. in tha past i have a chance to be a member of our national junior team, but because of being lazy and imagine it could not be happen, i leave it and now i am sad wahy i did not enough try. at the end, the one thing that in in never give up is being happy in the future becuase of those effort yo did without any less working.
in conclusion, based on what i have discussed above,we should never give up our goal. not only to respect to whay we create, but also to increase experience.i suggests every one do listen to word of someone that cause an irruption in our way. future is the things that your effort wil make.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, so, for example, i mean, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21868787276 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36310440071 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48310139165 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0505395006 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6285714286 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3714285714 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77142857143 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 65.0 5.5376344086 1174% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169370194692 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457441427293 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515047712364 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106184366011 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184516280169 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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