Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to you to appeal to allow me to carry on my work directly from home for three months as I am aware of the fact that you have permitted some of my peers to do the same.
I am associated with this company from past five years and I have been working as the Chief Recruitment Officer diligently since then. But now the problem is that my wife is seven months pregnant and is suffering from a critical illness called "Pre eclamsia" which could be quite fatal, if not dealt with properly. Indeed, doctor has advised her complete bed rest till delivery.
In addition, it would be in the favour of company as well because nowadays, I am not able to focus on my work. It is simply due to my worry regarding my wife. So, if you will permit me then it would be very feasible to concentrate and work efficiently. Also, at the same time I can look after my wife too as she is in desperate need of it.
Seeking your kind assistance.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you to appea...
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Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d assistance. Yours faithfully, John
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, then, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4247311828 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50669700759 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672043010753 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.804682091 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252939814722 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852823912437 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811420700252 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143533016253 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922369452074 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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