In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific examples and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, mass shooting is occurring frequently in some countries, to control such acts is an extremely intricate process. Some people believe the number of gun license acquired by individuals is increasing day-by-day is one of the main reasons. I strongly agree to this thought, as the increasing shooting incidents are creating law disorders. In the following passage, I will explain the causes and measures with examples to prove my statement.
Do increasing gun holders are the important factor for the frequent shooting attacks? Yes. For instance, the recent Florida shooting attack by Stephen Padlock killed 59 people and injured 250 innocents. Such incidents can be avoided by reducing gun sales to individuals. Moreover, many people do such act due to frustration at their work locations and issues with their family members are the other reasons. Additionally, the government don’t have stringent rules to curb the offenders to create threat in the society. Therefore, illegal gun production and procurement by individuals need to be restricted to prevent from further inhuman activities.
In some countries such India and china, where the number the of people holding is meagre, hence, mass shooting becomes a rare incident in these nations. When any celebrities request for gun license, the government should investigate the purpose and it also requires severs check before giving to them. Furthermore, having guns at public functions and ostentatious weddings should be punished to avoid individual rage due to enmity. Thus, it is believed, cancelling illegal gun license and avoiding its public usage can control such incident to an extent.
To sum up, as the proverb says,” prevention is better than cure”. If the government not take prompt actions against illegal gun usage then it will create a sense of fear among public, at time this will destabilize the government too.
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Suggestion: , &apos
... extent. To sum up, as the proverb says,' prevention is better than cure'. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86876211759 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6645832519 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232557115637 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680388081526 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392774071175 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129934594429 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625029457036 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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