It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, there is an ongoing debate about getting married prior to finishing school or getting a job is beneficial or not. While there are certainly valid arguments to claim that as a positive step, in my perspective, it has substantial negative impact on individuals’ lives. In this essay, it is going to examine both sides of the argument with relevant reasons and examples.
To commence with, there are several reasons why I am not in favor of this. Foremost among these is that economic problems. To cite and example, Harvard University researchers undertook a study to understand the relationship between people’s achievement and marry at an early age. The result revealed that those who could afford the cost of living before building a relationship were there times successful and effective than the others. Hence, scientific research supports the hypothesis that economic issues should be seriously taken into account.
In stark contrast, however, opponents believe that it should be noted that people whom have a tendency to marry earlier are far more happy and would, therefore, be able to achieve their goals far better. In fact, quite the contrary, not only do couples tend to enhance their living conditions, but they also show higher levels of motivation as well as creativity in order to fulfill their desires. Additionally, a recent scientific study conducted by Melbourne University has shown that such members of the public are mentally and even physically far healthier than single people, and this means that it is positively correlated with the way we live our life.
To recapitulate, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, my personal sentiment is that had individuals considered their conditions more accurately, they would have been more competent to make the right decision in terms of socioeconomic backgrounds to take action in this regard, accordingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27035830619 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93167571372 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651465798046 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1295277801 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932206654304 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328057042014 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779916424111 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546150534389 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635049151908 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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