it is argued that getting married before finishing their school or getting a job is not a good choice.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people doing jobs to pay their bills before finish their schooling. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that people getting marriage and getting jobs before finishing their school can not only contribute to enhance the standard of their life but also provides their utilities and rents. They feel mature and more responsible in their early age, and it leads to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to a wide range of advantages being offered by people getting married and doing jobs before finishing their school, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective but also enhance their productivity and standard of their life with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needleless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead. as far as, augmenting their chances of a better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can one broaden their horizons. Thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of people getting married and doing jobs before finishing their school.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that, the benefits of people getting married and doing jobs before finishing their school are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91780821918 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63727093287 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517123287671 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9375288494 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320605079568 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114020456737 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133094426601 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222629042849 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690895099252 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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