These days, a gap year is being utilised by students in various ways in every nation. While some people claim that youths ought to be emboldened to land decent jobs or do some sightseeing before joining a university, for many, i believe that the younger generations who wish to get the job experience or tour after finishing schools will have considerable disadvantages as opposed to benefits. This essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
To begin with, gaining work experiences generally opens up perfect opportunities for the future employability. For illustration, if an individua...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 365 350
No. of Characters: 1983 1500
No. of Different Words: 250 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.371 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.433 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.027 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 134 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 90 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 63 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.071 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.268 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.518 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.027 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... before joining a university, for many, i believe that the younger generations wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55616438356 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09796754177 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693150684932 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8276961646 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.857142857 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143408677635 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420048468336 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455499370457 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748614372694 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623495764734 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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