In a very competitive world, a person's educational qualifications has an important role in achieving a successful career. It is a common man's perspective that, a university degree is essential in leading a good career. On the contrary, others believe that this is no longer relevant in present day scenario.
To begin with, no matter what, a university degree is important for a person to get a good job and career opportunities. Even though companies are adopting entirely new strategies to recruit their employees, they always give a considerable importance to candidates educational qualifications. It is the key factor which helps a person to stand out in a crowd. When we opt for college degrees, we are actually focusing on a particular area of our interest. For instance, if a student is interested in accounting field, he should defintly choose commerce related stream for achieving a degree. As a result after getting out of the college he can look for an accounting job based on his qualification.
On the other hand, some people argue that education is no longer an essential factor to get a job. According to them, a person's intelligence and unique skills are the important factor which decides his future work life. Presently companies selection processes are completed changed, they actually look for unique talents rather than educational qualifications. Furthermore, some persons have some inborn stand out abilities. For example, if you consider the case of Mark Zuckerberg, the founder of Facebook, he is actually a college drop out. But he has some ideas and actually worked on that and became a huge successful entrepreneur.
In short, we can not say that university degrees are no longer required for a successful work life. It is true that some are able achieve great success without the support of educational qualifications but it is not the same for everyone.
- government investment in the arts such as music and theatre is a waste of money. government must invest this money in public services instead. to what extend do you agree with this statement? 70
- It is important to construct common areas such as parks, playgrounds and squares in all towns and cities. Do you agree or disagree? 78
- the continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are the causes of this continued rise ? do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity? 63
- The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- the bar chart shows scores of 3 teams a, b nd c over four different seasons. summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons were relevant. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
In a very competitive world, a persons educational qualifications has an impor...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ctor to get a job. According to them, a persons intelligence and unique skills are the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, for instance, in short, as a result, it is true, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10967741935 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12969065238 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545161290323 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6276386837 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.1764705882 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184425819522 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065931730779 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712088394038 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140141219738 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681780667284 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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