Dear Mr. Goldfarb,
I am writing to you concerning the complaint I have received from you. Let me explain what happened.
I started learning Saxophone recently. As you may know, I work full time during the weekdays and the only free time I am able to dedicate to my classes is weekends.
I am really sorry about the inconvenience I caused to you and Mrs. Golgfarb. I did not expect the sound of my instrument to be so loud. I totally understand your position and request you to accept my sincere apologies.
I have discussed this issue with my teacher and together we have decided that I will continue my classes only after moving to a separate house. I understand that it was not a good idea to practice saxophone in buildings of this kind.
I hope this unpleasant situation hasn’t hurt our friendship.
Sincerely yours,
Reza Afshar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...phone recently. As you may know, I work full time during the weekdays and the only free t...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e sound of my instrument to be so loud. I totally understand your position and re...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you to accept my sincere apologies. I have discussed this issue with my teach...
^
Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... only after moving to a separate house. I understand that it was not a good idea ...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...saxophone in buildings of this kind. I hope this unpleasant situation hasn&apo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80405405405 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81713004575 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3188545624 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6363636364 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157945601898 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516839930148 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060563322036 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082728684344 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764131480121 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.