People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
The purpose of education varies from person to person, so it is always difficult to figure out the exact reason. University education always paves the way to have a good job. In my opinion, there are three reasons for the general people to go to colleges or universities.
One of the cardinal reason is that the opportunity to develop expertise in a particular field of knowledge. At the high school, a pupil has to study a lot of subjects without special concentration on particular subject. So, after completing this level, interested people are attracted to get into higher education.
The second reason is hidden in basic human instinct. When a person sees that his/her friend is going to start higher education, then it attracts him/her much. As, there is no loss in it. Apart from this, they are also motivated by their well-wishers to get admit into colleges or university because of the extensive demand of this level’s degrees.
Thirdly, for some occupation university based education is important. For example, to become a lecturer, it is necessary to have PhD and it can be obtained only from tertiary level education. Besides, to join in the profession like researcher, it is good to have research based education which is not possible to get before undergraduate.
Equally, people’s views regarding education have changed in many ways. Many companies are advertising more jobs for the bachelor degree holders, in some cases, it is extended to master’s degree as well. This is not a bad sign. It indicates that higher education is getting more acceptance than before.
In conclusion, it is hard to determine the purpose of higher education but before getting involved in this level, it is important to think about it wisely and then pursue this level.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, regarding, second, so, then, third, thirdly, well, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09491525424 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89941301056 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5351343517 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155780712091 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501980182793 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587704767452 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785488864206 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486905421034 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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