We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospital, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computer a good things or should we be more suspicious of their benefits ?
Computers have become a reliable medium to communicate and automate work in several industries, such as the finance, medical, and the travel industry. It is replacing man power because of the productivity and accuracy delivered in comparison to human labor. Moreover with the advent of artificial intelligence, computers will be capable of emulating human intelligence and logic in the near future.
Humans have known to be the most intelligent power unit with a keen and decisive instinct to decipher right from wrong. However, with advancements in the field of information technology, computers will adapt cognitive processing of information to conclude decisions. For example, they will be capable of replacing language experts or simulating multiple flights at an airport. These tasks require adroitness and intelligence, a combination which is hard to find in humans. Therefore one could imagine that computers could replace highly skilled jobs such as that of machines, teachers and pilots.
While it is widely believed that such developments are positive, automation of processes, once done by humans, could be a premonition of unemployment. If processes become highly automated, organizations would not need employees but robots or computers to complete tasks. Many people would not have jobs for their survival, and the economy could decline because of low expenditures by people. Hence, such developments should be used with the awareness of its consequences on the job market.
In conclusion, although computers give us overarching benefits, its usage must be balanced along with human labor to maintain employment. if computers are used to improve working conditions such as labor intensive jobs, the developments in the field of computers could be sanguine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56826568266 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09957388807 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.5341659139 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.785714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159028682047 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556201761451 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439047322265 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100718962622 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164297152287 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.